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Chapter 31: BEYOND THE NAME SHE LEFT BEHIND

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When the harmattan winds stop coming, that's when we'll know the spirits have abandoned us.

Mirabel

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When the harmattan winds stop coming, that's when we'll know the spirits have abandoned us.

Mirabel

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UNSEEN

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When the harmattan winds stop coming, that's when we'll know the spirits have abandoned us.

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They did not wait for morning.

The forest was easier to trust in darkness than in light. Night hid movement, swallowed sound, and gave them a kind of cover the open day would not. So they walked while the world slept, stepping over roots, pushing through low branches, moving with no road but the direction Abena held in her mind.

The first river came before dawn.

It was not wide, but it was fast, its surface restless under the dim light. The sound of water filled the air, louder than anything they had heard since leaving the palace. Ama tightened her grip around Adwoa’s shoulders.

“Will it carry us away?” she asked.

“No,” Adwoa said, though she looked to Abena.

Abena stepped closer to the edge, studying the current. Then she bent, tightening the cloth around Kato against her chest until he was secured firmly to her body.

“Step where I step,” she said.

She entered first.

The water was cold, rising quickly against her legs, pushing hard enough to test her balance. She did not rush. Each step was placed carefully, her body adjusting to the force, her arms steady.

Adwoa followed behind her, holding Ama tighter as the water climbed.

Ama gasped softly when it touched her feet. “It is cold!”

“Hold on,” Adwoa murmured.

They crossed slowly, the current pressing against them as if trying to turn them back. But Abena did not turn. She moved forward until the water weakened, until the ground rose again beneath her feet.

When they reached the other side, they did not stop long.

Only enough to breathe.

Only enough to move again.

The days that followed blurred into motion.

They walked through thick forest and thinner paths, through areas where the ground softened into mud and others where it hardened into dry earth that cracked beneath their steps. They found fruits when they could, dug roots when they had to, and drank from streams that crossed their path.

They did not speak much.

Not because there was nothing to say—but because survival did not leave room for many words.

Ama asked questions sometimes.

“Where are we going?”

Abena would answer, “Forward.”

“Will we stop soon?”

“Not yet.”

“Will they find us?”

“No.”

The answers were always simple.

But Ama believed them.

Kato cried when he was hungry, slept when he was tired, and stayed close to Abena’s body as though he knew no other place. His presence slowed them, but Abena never complained. She adjusted her steps, her pace, her strength—all around carrying him.

Adwoa watched her often.

“You do not rest,” she said one evening as they paused near a fallen tree.

Abena shook her head slightly. “I rest when we are safe.”

Adwoa looked around at the endless stretch of forest.

“And when will that be?”

Abena did not answer.

Because she did not know.

The land began to change after some time.

The forest thinned in places, opening into narrow paths that showed signs of human movement—broken branches, footprints, faint traces of fire long extinguished. It was the first sign that they were nearing somewhere lived in.

Abena slowed.

“Stay close,” she said.

They moved more carefully now, their senses sharper, their steps quieter. The air carried a different scent—smoke, distant voices, the faint rhythm of life beyond the trees.

And then—

they saw it.

A village.

Not large. Not loud. But present.

Mud huts stood in scattered lines, their thatched roofs worn but steady. Women moved between them carrying water, children ran barefoot across the open ground, and the sound of conversation rose and fell naturally.

Ama’s eyes widened.

“People,” she whispered.

Adwoa looked at Abena. “Do we go in?”

Abena stood still for a moment.

Then she shook her head.

“No.”

Ama looked confused. “Why?”

Abena’s voice remained calm. “Because people bring questions.”

Adwoa nodded slowly.

“And we are not ready to answer them.”

Abena turned away from the village.

They did not enter.

They did not speak to anyone.

They walked past it, keeping to the edges, keeping to the trees, until the sounds of life faded behind them once more.

They moved on.

Further.

Deeper.

And then—

Abena saw it.

Not the village.

But the land beyond it.

A path that curved in a way she recognized.

A tree that leaned in a way she remembered.

Her steps slowed.

Her breathing changed.

Adwoa noticed immediately. “What is it?”

Abena did not answer at first.

Her eyes moved across the land, searching, confirming.

Then she spoke.

“This is Akwetia.”

The name settled heavily.

Adwoa looked up. “Your village?”

Abena nodded once.

Ama’s face lit with curiosity. “Can we go there?”

Abena did not move.

Her eyes remained fixed ahead, where the land stretched into something that once belonged to her.

Memories rose uninvited—her mother’s voice, her father’s silence, the day everything had been taken from her and handed away without her consent.

Her jaw tightened slightly.

“No,” she said.

Ama frowned. “Why?”

Abena looked down at her.

“Because it is not mine anymore.”

Adwoa watched her carefully. “You are certain?”

Abena nodded.

“They sold me,” she said quietly. “I will not return to what gave me away.”

There was no anger in her tone.

Only decision.

She turned again.

Away from Akwetia.

Away from everything it held.

And this time, she did not slow.

They walked until even memory could not follow easily.

Until the land changed again, growing quieter, emptier, untouched by the movement of many people. The paths disappeared. The signs of villages faded. The forest thickened in a different way—not hostile, but distant.

Here, no one was looking.

Here, no one expected anyone.

They stopped.

Adwoa set Ama down slowly, stretching her shoulders with a quiet exhale.

Ama looked around, her voice softer now. “Is this where we stay?”

Abena looked ahead.

The land was open enough to build.

Hidden enough to remain unseen.

Far enough to not be found.

“Yes,” she said.

Adwoa nodded, a faint relief settling into her expression.

Ama smiled slightly, turning in a small circle as if claiming the space without knowing it.

Kato stirred softly against Abena’s chest.

Abena untied the cloth and held him properly, looking down at his face, then out at the land again.

No walls.

No voices commanding her.

No one waiting to take anything from her.

Only space.

Only silence.

Only choice.

She stepped forward.

And this time, after some rest , they began to build a shelter .

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