Thriller

Chapter 29: THE NIGHT SHE ENDED IT

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When the harmattan winds stop coming, that's when we'll know the spirits have abandoned us.

Mirabel

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UNSEEN

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When the harmattan winds stop coming, that's when we'll know the spirits have abandoned us.

Mirabel

Mirabel

UNSEEN

Afripad

When the harmattan winds stop coming, that's when we'll know the spirits have abandoned us.

Mirabel

Mirabel

UNSEEN

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Nine months passed, and the boy no longer looked fragile.

Kato had grown into a child who could sit, reach, and cry with strength. His body had filled out, his eyes alert, his voice loud enough to demand attention when he wished. Ama had taken to him in her own quiet way, sometimes watching him as though she were already older than her years, sometimes whispering things to him that made no sense but sounded important.

Abena watched them both, but her mind was no longer in the present.

It had already moved ahead.

The palace had settled again into its illusion of control. The deaths had not been forgotten, but they had been buried under routine, under arrogance, under the king’s belief that whatever had happened before would not dare happen again.

That belief was his final mistake.

That night, nothing announced what was about to happen.

There was no warning, no preparation spoken aloud, no signal given.

Abena rose quietly.

She did not look at Adwoa.

She did not speak to Ama.

She did not carry Kato.

She simply stood and walked.

Her steps were steady, her face calm, her mind already inside the king’s chamber before her body reached it.

The guards saw her approach and did not question it.

“She goes to him again,” one muttered.

“Let her pass,” the other replied.

No one stopped her.

The door opened.

The king sat within, half turned, his presence heavy in the room as always. He did not rise immediately when she entered. Instead, he looked at her with the same careless authority he had always worn.

“You come without being called,” he said.

Abena stepped forward slowly.

For the first time, she lifted her eyes fully to him.

And then she spoke his name.

“King Agyemang Kwadwo.”

The full name landed differently.

Not like a servant speaking.

Not like someone beneath him.

The king frowned slightly, his posture shifting as something unfamiliar passed through the moment.

“You forget yourself,” he said.

Abena continued walking toward him, her voice steady.

“No,” she replied. “I remember everything.”

He stood now, watching her more carefully.

“There is something wrong with you tonight,” he said.

Abena stopped in front of him.

“Yes,” she answered.

“There is.”

For a brief second, there was silence.

Then she leaned slightly closer.

“Do you know who has been killing in your palace?” she asked.

The king’s eyes narrowed. “What are you saying?”

Abena’s lips curved—not in softness, but in something colder.

“It was me.”

He did not have time to react.

The knife appeared in her hand as if it had always been there.

The first stab drove straight into him.

Shock tore across his face, his body jerking backward as he tried to grasp what had just happened.

But Abena did not stop.

She struck again.

And again.

And again.

Each stab carried years within it—every moment taken from her, every wound, every night she had endured without choice. Her arm moved with force, with precision, with a fury that had been silent for too long.

“You remember the guard?” she said through clenched breath as she struck him again. “That was me.”

Another stab.

“And your son—” her voice hardened further “—that was me too.”

He tried to push her away, but his strength failed him quickly. Blood spread across his body, across his hands, across the space between them.

Abena did not stop until his resistance ended.

Until his body went still.

Until there was nothing left to fight.

Only then did she step back, her chest rising heavily, her hands stained, her body marked with what she had done.

She looked at him once.

Not with fear.

Not with doubt.

Then she turned and walked out.

The guards saw her.

But something in her face—something in the way she moved—made them hesitate just long enough.

By the time confusion caught up with them, she was already gone.

When she entered the slave quarters, Adwoa looked up first.

She froze.

Blood.

Not small.

Not hidden.

It was on Abena’s hands, her cloth, her body.

Adwoa did not ask.

She knew.

“It is time,” Abena said.

That was all.

Adwoa moved instantly.

She grabbed Ama, lifting her onto her back and tying her securely without waiting for permission.

Abena paused for a fraction of a second, surprised—but she did not question it.

Instead, she picked up Kato, wrapping him tightly against her chest with her cloth, securing him so he would not fall.

Ama’s voice came softly, “What is happening?”

Adwoa answered, “Hold on.”

They did not wait.

They ran.

The palace had not yet fully understood what had happened, but the first shout came quickly.

“The king!”

Then another—

“He is bleeding!”

And then chaos followed like fire catching dry grass.

By the time the alarm rose fully, they were already moving through the path Abena had prepared.

The waste passage.

Narrow.

Dark.

Ignored.

They pushed through it without stopping, the smell thick, the ground uneven, but neither of them slowed. Behind them, voices rose, orders shouted, footsteps gathering direction.

“They are escaping!”

Five guards broke away from the chaos and gave chase.

Abena heard them before she saw them.

“They are coming,” Adwoa said, her voice tight.

“I know,” Abena replied.

They ran until the path widened enough that turning was unavoidable.

The first guard reached them with speed.

Abena moved faster.

The knife met him before he could strike.

He fell instantly.

The second rushed forward, but Adwoa met him with a force born from fear and decision. She struck hard, again and again, until he dropped.

The third came with caution, but not caution enough.

Abena stepped aside and drove the blade into him with clean precision.

He collapsed.

The remaining two guards slowed.

They had seen enough.

These were not fleeing slaves.

These were fighters.

For a moment, tension held between them.

Then the guards stepped back.

And turned.

They fled.

Abena and Adwoa did not waste that moment.

They ran.

Away from the palace.

Away from the noise.

Away from everything that had held them.

Behind them, the kingdom had begun to break. Slaves rose in confusion, some fighting, some escaping, some falling under the weight of retaliation.

But ahead—

there was only darkness.

And the chance to never be found again.

Abena tightened her hold on Kato as she ran, her breath heavy but unbroken.

For the first time—

she was not running to survive.

She was running free.

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