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Chapter 3: THE ROAD THAT ERASES NAMES

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When the harmattan winds stop coming, that's when we'll know the spirits have abandoned us.

Mirabel

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When the harmattan winds stop coming, that's when we'll know the spirits have abandoned us.

Mirabel

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UNSEEN

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When the harmattan winds stop coming, that's when we'll know the spirits have abandoned us.

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UNSEEN

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They did not walk fast at first.

The men moved with the patience of people who knew the road would not end in a day. Their steps were steady, measured, neither hurried nor slow. Dust rose lightly with each movement, settling on skin, on cloth, on the small spaces between breath and thought.

Abena walked among them, her wrists bound in front of her with rope that scratched against her skin each time she shifted. It was not tight enough to cut, but tight enough to remind her.

She did not stumble.

She did not speak.

Behind her, Akwetia had already disappeared—not because it was far, but because she refused to turn her head.

The path narrowed as they moved away from the open village and into forested land. Tall trees rose on both sides, their trunks thick, roots breaking through the soil like old bones. The air grew cooler beneath the canopy, but heavier, filled with the scent of damp leaves and something quietly rotting beneath them.

One of the traders—shorter than the rest, with a scar that ran from the edge of his left eye down to his jaw—walked close behind her.

“Walk straight,” he said.

“I am walking,” Abena replied.

“Then walk without pride.”

Abena did not answer.

The man clicked his tongue softly but said nothing more.

Ahead, another group joined them before midday—three more captives, two men and a young girl who could not have seen more than twelve seasons. Her hair was loosely braided, the ends frayed and uneven, as though it had been done in haste or under distress. Her cloth hung awkwardly on her thin frame, one side slipping often from her shoulder.

She was crying.

Not loudly.

But continuously.

The sound followed them like something alive.

“Please,” the girl whispered, her voice breaking. “Please, I will be good… I will listen… please take me back…”

No one responded.

One of the traders shoved her forward when she slowed.

“Walk.”

She stumbled, nearly falling, then caught herself. Her breath came in short bursts, panic sitting heavily in her chest.

Abena watched her.

Not with pity alone—but with recognition.

She moved slightly closer.

“What is your name?” Abena asked quietly.

The girl did not answer at first, her crying swallowing her voice.

Abena tried again, softer.

“Your name.”

The girl turned her head slightly.

“Efua,” she whispered.

Abena nodded once.

“Walk, Efua.”

“I cannot,” the girl said. “My legs—”

“You can,” Abena cut in, not harshly, but firmly. “If you fall, they will not wait for you.”

Efua shook her head, tears falling freely.

“I want my mother.”

Abena’s gaze shifted forward.

“I know.”

It was the only softness she allowed.

After that, she said nothing more.

But she slowed her pace just enough so the girl could keep up without drawing attention.

Small things.

Quiet things.

They walked until the sun stood high and then began to tilt.

When they stopped, it was not in a village.

It was in a clearing.

The traders dropped their loads, stretching their arms, rolling their shoulders. One of them brought out a small gourd of water, passing it around among themselves first before turning to the captives.

“Drink,” he said.

Not kindly.

Not cruelly.

Just as instruction.

The rope binding Abena’s wrists was loosened slightly so she could hold the gourd. She drank carefully, not rushing, letting the water sit in her mouth for a moment before swallowing.

Beside her, Efua grabbed the gourd when it reached her, drinking too quickly. Water spilled down her chin, soaking into her cloth.

“Slow,” Abena murmured.

Efua coughed, choking slightly, then wiped her face with the back of her hand.

“Thank you,” she whispered.

Abena did not respond.

She was watching the men.

Counting.

Not their numbers—that was obvious.

Their habits.

Who spoke the most.

Who watched the road.

Who carried weapons.

One man sat apart from the others, sharpening a short blade with slow, deliberate movements. His hair was cut close to his head, his face expressionless, as though nothing around him required reaction.

Another laughed loudly at something one of the others said, his teeth uneven, his posture relaxed in a way that suggested carelessness.

Abena noted him.

Careless men made mistakes.

The one with the scar noticed her looking.

“What are you watching?” he asked.

Abena held his gaze briefly, then looked away.

“Nothing.”

He stood and walked toward her.

“You watch too much.”

“I look where I am taken.”

He stopped in front of her, studying her face.

“You think looking will help you?”

Abena met his eyes again.

“Yes.”

He smiled slightly.

“Looking will only show you how far you are from where you want to be.”

“Then I will know the distance,” she replied.

For a moment, he said nothing.

Then he turned away.

“Eat,” he said, tossing a small piece of dried cassava toward her.

It landed in the dirt.

Abena picked it up without complaint, brushing off the dust before biting into it. It was hard, tasteless, but it filled the mouth, gave the body something to hold onto.

They rested only briefly before moving again.

This time, the pace increased.

The path became rougher, roots catching at their feet, stones pressing against bare soles. Efua stumbled more often now, her strength thinning with each step.

Near sunset, it happened.

She fell.

Not a stumble.

A full fall.

Her knees hit the ground first, then her hands, then her body folded forward.

“I cannot,” she said, her voice barely audible. “Please… I cannot…”

One of the traders turned.

“Get up.”

She shook her head weakly.

“Please…”

He walked toward her, irritation already rising in his expression.

Abena stepped forward before she could think.

“She needs a moment.”

The man stopped.

“And who are you to speak?”

“No one,” Abena said. “But if she cannot walk, you will have to carry her or leave her.”

The man’s eyes hardened.

“Or beat her until she walks.”

Abena held his gaze.

“That will slow you more.”

Silence.

The other men watched.

Not intervening.

Not stopping him.

Waiting.

The man looked down at Efua, then back at Abena.

“You speak as though you understand this road.”

“I understand time,” she replied.

Another pause.

Then he exhaled sharply.

“Two moments,” he said. “Then she walks.”

Abena nodded once.

She crouched beside Efua.

“Listen to me,” she said quietly. “You will stand. Not because you want to—but because you must.”

Efua’s eyes were glassy with exhaustion.

“I cannot feel my legs.”

“You do not need to feel them,” Abena said. “You only need to move them.”

She helped the girl sit up.

“Breathe.”

Efua tried.

Her breaths were uneven, shaking.

“Again,” Abena said.

After a few attempts, the girl managed something steadier.

“Now stand.”

Efua hesitated.

Abena’s voice lowered.

“If you do not stand, they will make you wish you had.”

That was enough.

With effort, Efua pushed herself up, swaying slightly.

Abena steadied her for a brief moment, then stepped back.

The man watched, then nodded.

“Walk.”

They continued.

The sky darkened slowly, the orange fading into deep blue, then into the kind of darkness that swallowed shapes.

They stopped again only when night fully settled.

This time, there was no clearing.

Just a space between trees.

The captives were gathered together, ropes checked, movements limited.

No fire, no comfort , just ground.

Abena lay on her side, her body aching in ways she had not yet begun to count.

Beside her, Efua curled into herself, her breathing uneven but quieter now.

Around them, the forest spoke—distant insects, rustling leaves, the occasional cry of something unseen.

Abena’s eyes remained open.

She replayed the path in her mind.

Every turn,every tree, every sound.

Even with her hands bound, even with her body held, she was mapping_Not for escape, not yet but for knowledge.

And knowledge, she understood, was something no rope could hold.

Above her, the branches shifted slightly, revealing a thin slice of moonlight.

Abena stared at it for a long moment.

Then she closed her eyes but not to sleep.

But to store every step.

Every voice and every weakness.

The road had taken her name.

But it had not taken her mind.

Not yet.

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