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Chapter 2: THE PRICE OF A DAUGHTER

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When the harmattan winds stop coming, that's when we'll know the spirits have abandoned us.

Mirabel

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When the harmattan winds stop coming, that's when we'll know the spirits have abandoned us.

Mirabel

Mirabel

UNSEEN

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When the harmattan winds stop coming, that's when we'll know the spirits have abandoned us.

Mirabel

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UNSEEN

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The morning after the suitors left did not feel like morning.

It felt like something had been taken from the air.

In Akwetia, dawn usually came with rhythm—women sweeping compounds with short brooms made from palm fronds, children chasing each other barefoot across the red earth, men clearing their throats as they prepared to step into the day. But that morning, sound returned slowly, cautiously, as if the village itself was unsure of what had shifted.

At the Korsi compound, nothing moved at first.

The hut sat quiet, its clay walls holding the coolness of the night, its thatched roof slightly uneven where last season’s winds had lifted and dropped parts of it without repair. Outside, the small cooking area still held yesterday’s ashes, grey and undisturbed.

It was Esi who stepped out first.

Her hair, usually tied neatly into small, coiled knots close to her scalp, had loosened in the night. A few strands now rested against her neck, damp with the heat she had slept in. Her wrapper was tied higher than usual, hastily done, as though she had woken with urgency rather than rest.

She began sweeping.

Not because the ground needed it—but because movement was easier than thought.

Inside the hut, Kwaku sat on his stool again, the same one from the day before. He had not slept much. His eyes were slightly sunken, his beard rougher than usual, as if he had forgotten to trim it. His cloth was tied carelessly, the edge hanging unevenly at his knee.

Abena was awake.

She had been long before the rooster called.

She sat on her mat, back against the wall, her knees drawn slightly inward. Her hair—thick, dark, and tightly curled—had been parted into simple lines the previous week, but the neatness had begun to fade. A few strands had escaped their pattern, softening the sharpness of her face.

She watched her father.

He did not look at her.

When he finally spoke, his voice was low.

“They will come today.”

Abena did not pretend not to understand.

“Who?”

Kwaku’s jaw tightened.

“The men from the river path.”

A small pause.

“Traders.”

The word settled heavily between them.

Abena’s eyes did not widen. She did not gasp. But something in her posture changed—slightly straighter, slightly more alert.

“You have already called them,” she said.

It was not a question.

Kwaku rubbed his palm slowly over his knee.

“They were already on their way.”

“That is not what I asked.”

Silence.

Then—

“Yes.”

Esi’s sweeping stopped outside.

For a moment, the only sound was the faint rustle of dry leaves shifting across the compound.

Abena stood.

Not abruptly. Not violently.

But with intention.

“You sold me.”

Her voice was calm.

Too calm.

Kwaku finally looked at her, and there was something in his eyes now—not guilt, not fully—but something close to being cornered by his own decision.

“I did what had to be done.”

“You chose a price over your daughter.”

“I chose survival.”

“At my cost.”

“At all our cost!” he snapped, the first rise in his voice since the night before. “Do you think hunger chooses gently? Do you think the world will bend because you refuse a man?”

Abena stepped closer.

“No. But I thought my father would not hand me to men who trade flesh.”

Kwaku stood up now, his height casting a longer shadow in the dim hut.

“You speak like someone who has never buried a child,” he said quietly. “Like someone who has not watched food disappear from a house while mouths remain.”

Esi entered quickly, her voice sharp with warning.

“Enough. The neighbors will hear.”

Abena turned to her.

“Let them hear.”

Esi’s eyes softened for a brief moment—pain, deep and tired.

“They will not help you.”

Abena held her gaze.

“I am not asking them to.”

Outside, a distant sound broke through the tension—the dull rhythm of footsteps. Not one pair. Several.

Measured.

Approaching.

Kwaku closed his eyes briefly, then opened them again.

“They are here.”

Esi moved quickly, adjusting her cloth, wiping her hands, forcing her face into something presentable. But her eyes betrayed her—uneasy, restless.

Abena did not move.

“I will not go with them,” she said.

Kwaku looked at her, and this time there was no attempt to argue.

“They are not coming to ask.”

The footsteps grew louder.

Dust rose faintly at the edge of the compound.

Three men entered first, followed by two others who carried coils of rope and a long staff between them. Their bodies were built for movement, their skin marked by sun and travel. Their cloths were darker, heavier, wrapped tightly for long journeys. Around their necks and wrists were small charms—leather pouches, beads, symbols of protection or warning.

Their hair was not styled like village men. It was shorter, practical, some tied into small knots, others left rough. Faces hard, not cruel by expression—but by habit.

One of them stepped forward.

“You are Kwaku Korsi.”

It was a statement.

Kwaku nodded.

“I am.”

“You sent word.”

“Yes.”

The man’s eyes moved briefly across the compound, then settled on Abena.

“That is her.”

Again—not a question.

Kwaku did not answer this time.

Abena stood still, her chin slightly raised.

The man approached her slowly, circling once, observing as one would inspect livestock—but there was something else in his gaze. Not interest. Assessment.

“She looks strong,” he said.

“She is stubborn,” Kwaku replied.

The man gave a short, dry laugh.

“They all are at first.”

Abena’s fingers curled slightly at her sides.

Her elder brother and her two sisters were standing at the doorway of the hut , watching carefully with pain and an urge to rescue her.

“I am not going with you.”

The man stopped in front of her.

“You are already going.”

“I am not yours.”

He tilted his head slightly.

“Not yet.”

The other men began setting down a small sack. One untied it, revealing cowries—white shells, smooth and polished, catching the morning light. Alongside them were folded cloths and a small bundle of dried goods.

Payment.

Esi looked away.

Kwaku’s eyes stayed fixed on the sack.

“How much?” he asked.

The lead trader crouched, picking up a handful of cowries and letting them fall back into the pile with a soft, hollow sound.

“For her… and the trouble she carries in her mouth—this.”

Abena laughed once.

Short.

Sharp.

“So that is what I am worth.”

No one answered her.

Kwaku hesitated.

Just for a moment.

Then he nodded.

“It is enough.”

Something in Abena’s chest tightened—but she did not let it show.

“Enough for what?” she asked quietly. “For me to disappear?”

Esi’s voice broke.

“Abena…”

But Abena did not look at her.

She was looking at her father.

“Say it,” she said. “Say what you are doing.”

Kwaku swallowed.

“I am giving you a chance to live.”

Abena’s expression did not change.

“This is not life.”

“It is more than death.”

“For who?” she asked.

There was no answer came.

The trader stood.

“We are done here.”

He gestured.

Two of the men moved forward.

This time, Abena resisted.

Not wildly, but fully.

Her body shifted, her weight grounded, her arms pulling back as they reached for her.

“Do not touch me.”

One of the men grabbed her wrist.

She twisted sharply, trying to break free, but another caught her other arm. The grip tightened.

Esi cried out.

“Do not hurt her!”

The men did not respond.

They had done this too many times.

Abena struggled harder now, her breath rising, her feet digging into the earth, leaving marks in the red soil.

“Kwaku!” she called.

Not “Father.”

His name.

He flinched but he did not move.

That was the moment.

Not when they tied her hands, not when they pulled her forward.

But when he did not move,Abena’s resistance slowed.

Not because she was overpowered, but because something inside her had gone still.

They bound her wrists with rope—tight, efficient. One of them pulled the cloth from his shoulder and moved to blindfold her.

She jerked her head back.

“No.”

The man paused, then looked at the lead trader.

The trader shrugged.

“Let her see.”

The cloth was lowered.

Abena’s eyes moved one last time across the compound.

The hut,the cooking stones,the neem tree.

Her mother—standing, shaking, hands pressed to her mouth.

Her father—still as stone.

She held his gaze, not pleading, not begging, remembering, then she turned away. They began to walk., the village did not stop them.

People watched. Some from doorways, some from behind walls and no one spoke.

Dust rose beneath their feet as they moved down the narrow path leading away from Akwetia.

Abena did not look back again.

Not because she was strong.

But because she understood something clearly now:

There was nothing behind her that would come for her.

The path stretched ahead—unknown, unkind.

But it was hers now.

Bound hands.

Unbroken mind.

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