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Chapter 13: Visitations

Mirabel

Mirabel

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When the harmattan winds stop coming, that's when we'll know the spirits have abandoned us.

Mirabel

Mirabel

THIS HOUSE IS NOT A HOME

Afripad

When the harmattan winds stop coming, that's when we'll know the spirits have abandoned us.

Mirabel

Mirabel

THIS HOUSE IS NOT A HOME

Afripad

When the harmattan winds stop coming, that's when we'll know the spirits have abandoned us.

Mirabel

Mirabel

THIS HOUSE IS NOT A HOME

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The afternoon sun sat heavily on the compound, pressing warmth into the cracked walls and dusty ground. The hibiscus leaves drooped slightly, their bright petals no longer dancing but resting, as though the day itself had grown tired.

Amaka sat on a low stool in the kitchen, peeling yams slowly. Her movements were measured, almost mechanical, but her mind was far from the task before her. The past few days had stretched her in ways she had not expected—her body adjusting, her emotions shifting, Kunle’s silence growing heavier than his words.

She had not told anyone else.

Not her parents. Not the older women in the compound. Not even fully to Chioma beyond that quiet confirmation. The news felt too fragile, too complicated to share freely.

A knock sounded at the wooden door.

Amaka paused, knife in hand. Visitors were not unusual, but something about the knock—firm, familiar—sent a quiet tension through her chest.

She wiped her hands quickly and went to open it.

Her breath caught.

“Papa… Mama…”

Her parents stood there, framed by the harsh afternoon light. Her mother’s wrapper was neatly tied, her headscarf firm, her expression a mixture of concern and restraint. Her father stood beside her, tall but slightly stooped with age, his presence calm but watchful.

“Will you not let us in?” her mother said gently.

Amaka stepped aside quickly. “Please, come in.”

They entered the compound slowly, their eyes taking in everything—the hibiscus, the worn edges of the veranda, the quiet stillness that seemed to sit heavier than it should.

Her mother’s gaze lingered on her. “You’ve lost weight,” she said.

“I’m fine,” Amaka replied quickly.

Her father lowered himself into a chair in the veranda, exhaling softly. “Is Kunle at home?”

“He’s inside,” Amaka said. “I’ll call him.”

Kunle emerged moments later, his presence filling the doorway as always. His expression shifted when he saw them—polite, controlled, almost welcoming.

“Ah, Mama. Papa. You didn’t inform us you were coming,” he said, stepping forward to greet them.

“It was not a planned visit,” her father replied. “We were nearby.”

There was a brief exchange of greetings, of practiced smiles and careful politeness. Amaka stood slightly behind, watching the performance unfold—the version of Kunle the world was allowed to see.

They sat together in the veranda. Amaka brought water, her hands steady, her face composed. The compound seemed unusually quiet, as though even the neighbors sensed the weight of the moment.

It was her mother who spoke first.

“Amaka,” she said, her tone softer now, “how is your home?”

Amaka hesitated. The question was simple, but the answer was not. She glanced briefly at Kunle, who sat upright, his expression unreadable.

“It is… fine,” she said.

Her mother’s eyes lingered on her, searching, but she said nothing more immediately.

Her father cleared his throat. “Marriage is not always easy,” he began, his voice measured. “There are seasons. Times of adjustment. You must learn patience.”

Amaka felt the familiar weight of expectation settle on her shoulders. “Yes, Papa.”

Kunle nodded slightly, as though in agreement. “She is still learning,” he said. “Running a household requires discipline. Understanding. It is not something that comes easily.”

Amaka’s fingers tightened in her lap, but her face remained calm.

Her mother shifted slightly. “And you, Kunle,” she said, “you must also guide with care. A woman grows where she is nurtured.”

Kunle smiled faintly. “Of course, Mama. I do what is necessary.”

There was a pause.

Amaka felt her heart begin to beat faster. The words she had been holding inside her pressed forward, demanding space. Before she could stop herself, she spoke.

“Mama… Papa… I… I have something to tell you.”

All eyes turned to her.

Kunle’s gaze sharpened, but he said nothing.

Amaka swallowed, her hand unconsciously moving to her abdomen. “I am pregnant.”

The words settled into the air, heavy and undeniable.

Her mother’s eyes widened slightly, then softened. “Ah…” she breathed, a small smile forming. “After three years…”

Her father nodded slowly, a look of quiet satisfaction crossing his face. “This is good news,” he said. “Very good news.”

Amaka looked at them, searching their faces, feeling a flicker of the joy she had expected when she first discovered it.

Then she glanced at Kunle.

His expression had not changed.

Her mother noticed. Her gaze shifted between them, something unreadable passing through her eyes. “And you, Kunle?” she asked gently. “You are pleased?”

Kunle leaned back slightly, his voice calm, controlled. “It is… news. We will handle it.”

The warmth in the air cooled instantly.

Her mother’s smile faded just a fraction. “A child is not just something to handle,” she said quietly. “It is something to welcome.”

Kunle’s lips pressed into a thin line. “Of course. But one must also be practical.”

Silence followed.

Amaka felt it—the shift, the unspoken tension now visible to others, no longer hidden behind closed doors.

Her father cleared his throat again. “Children bring responsibility,” he said carefully. “But they also bring life into a home.”

Kunle nodded once. “Yes.”

But the word carried no warmth.

Her mother reached for Amaka’s hand, squeezing it gently. “You must take care of yourself,” she said. “Rest when you need to. Do not carry everything alone.”

Amaka nodded, her throat tight.

Kunle stood abruptly. “I have some work to attend to,” he said. “Excuse me.”

He left without another word.

The silence he left behind was louder than anything he could have said.

Her mother exhaled slowly. “Amaka…”

Amaka shook her head slightly, a silent plea. Not now. Not here.

Her father looked toward the doorway Kunle had disappeared through, then back at her. His expression was thoughtful, concerned, but restrained.

“We will talk,” he said quietly.

Amaka nodded.

Outside, the compound continued as always—the rustle of leaves, the distant laughter, the hum of ordinary life. But inside, something had shifted.

The truth was no longer hidden.

And for the first time, Amaka realized that her life—her marriage, her pregnancy, her quiet struggles—was beginning to take shape in ways that could no longer be contained within silence.

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