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Sophia was supposed to be on a flight back to Lagos, but fate had other plans for her. Her NYSC posting letter sends her to Neku, a village so obscure that even her platoon officer has never heard of it. Yet when she finally arrives, tucked between rolling green hills beneath a purple-orange sky, the people are waiting for her. They are almost too happy to see her, claiming she was the first Corper they ever received. Neku is beautiful, but fear lives there. Beyond its hills, neighbouring villages are being emptied one after another by armed invaders. Homes have burned, farms have been abandoned, and families sleep with bags packed beside their beds. Death tolls was too much yet the media publicise it falsely. And somehow, Sophia's arrival has given the people of Neku hope. It begins with a priest touching the strange birthmark on her wrist and whispering a name she has never heard before. ODELUWA. From since that encounter, strange things started happening to her, haunting her. And despite her dead mother warnings to leave the village, she couldn't. And while the horrors of Neku persisted, she met the man whom she'll fall in love with, but was destined to destroy her. With him, she dug deeper Sophia digs into Neku's past, discovered lies she's been told. And one day, when the armed men have come to spill blood on the land, Sophia would suffer the worst just to liberate the people of Neku. But the most emotional part is the part where Odeluwa leaves.

Odeluwa

Sophia was supposed to be on a flight back to Lagos, but fate had other plans for her. Her NYSC posting letter sends her to Neku, a village so obscure that even her platoon officer has never heard of it. Yet when she finally arrives, tucked between rolling green hills beneath a purple-orange sky, the people are waiting for her. They are almost too happy to see her, claiming she was the first Corper they ever received. Neku is beautiful, but fear lives there. Beyond its hills, neighbouring villages are being emptied one after another by armed invaders. Homes have burned, farms have been abandoned, and families sleep with bags packed beside their beds. Death tolls was too much yet the media publicise it falsely. And somehow, Sophia's arrival has given the people of Neku hope. It begins with a priest touching the strange birthmark on her wrist and whispering a name she has never heard before. ODELUWA. From since that encounter, strange things started happening to her, haunting her. And despite her dead mother warnings to leave the village, she couldn't. And while the horrors of Neku persisted, she met the man whom she'll fall in love with, but was destined to destroy her. With him, she dug deeper Sophia digs into Neku's past, discovered lies she's been told. And one day, when the armed men have come to spill blood on the land, Sophia would suffer the worst just to liberate the people of Neku. But the most emotional part is the part where Odeluwa leaves.

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Adaobi Agbalaka
Adaobi Agbalaka @ adaobi_agbalaka · 1 week ago

I really love this piece.. ❤

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Etima Umofia

Etima Umofia

@ etima_umofia · 4 days ago

I wish it was longer 🔥🔥🔥 it’s such a captivating read. Way to go Queeneth.

Lazyking

Lazyking

@ lazyking · 1 week ago

Interesting story

Caesar

Caesar

@ caesar_ · 1 week ago

Amazing story

Caesar

Caesar

@ caesar_ · 1 week ago

Amazing story

Benita

Benita

@ benita · 1 week ago

Babeeee thank you for the gift of your writing

Somtochukwu Nwawulu

Somtochukwu Nwawulu

@ somtochukwu_nwawulu · 1 week ago

I wish there was more 🥹🥹 it was an amazing read

Queenet Ani
Queenet Ani
@ queenetwrites · 1 week ago

I'm glad you read it 🤭

Henry Unegbu

Henry Unegbu

@ henry_unegbu · 1 week ago

Great read

Queenet Ani
Queenet Ani
@ queenetwrites · 1 week ago

Thanks Henry ❤️

Nsikan-Abasi Ufot Ubong

Nsikan-Abasi Ufot Ubong

@ nsikan-abasi_ufot_ubong · 1 week ago

Absolutely wonderful story, magnific. Captivated and quite frankly almost scared me on some parts. Awesome

Queenet Ani
Queenet Ani
@ queenetwrites · 1 week ago

I enjoy writing horror. 🤭

Ani sunshine

Ani sunshine

@ ani_sunshine_ · 1 week ago

Every part of this story was impactful, but my favorite part was when she was with her mum and it turned out to be a dream. It felt so real. Really good work, Queen 💯

Queenet Ani
Queenet Ani
@ queenetwrites · 1 week ago

Aw. Thank youuuuuu

Joshua Joseph

Joshua Joseph

@ joshua_joseph · 1 week ago

Wow amazing

Juliet Nwosu

Juliet Nwosu

@ juliet_nwosu · 1 week ago

It's a good read. Wonderful!

Queenet Ani
Queenet Ani
@ queenetwrites · 1 week ago

Thank you Juliet 🤭

Favour Chiagozie Ani

Favour Chiagozie Ani

@ favour_chiagozie_ani · 1 week ago

Great work 💯❤️

Queenet Ani
Queenet Ani
@ queenetwrites · 1 week ago

Thank youuuuu

Chinonso

Chinonso

@ chinonso_ · 1 week ago

This would make a good movie 🎥

Queenet Ani
Queenet Ani
@ queenetwrites · 1 week ago

I guess you read every bit of the story 😂

Ezinwanne

Ezinwanne

@ ezinwanne · 1 week ago

This is a wonderful read! Wow

Queenet Ani
Queenet Ani
@ queenetwrites · 1 week ago

Aw! Thank you 🥹❤️

Alexa💕

Alexa💕

@ alexa💕 · 1 week ago

Beautiful way to start my morning with this book✨

Queenet Ani
Queenet Ani
@ queenetwrites · 1 week ago

Aw. Thank you Alexa ❤️🤭

Richard Ekeocha

Richard Ekeocha

@ richard_ekeocha · 1 week ago

Really good readd

Queenet Ani
Queenet Ani
@ queenetwrites · 1 week ago

Thank you Rich 🤭

Marie

Marie

@ marie · 1 week ago

I'm reading through and thoroughly impressed. I didn't know you also write fiction stories and it's a sweet surprise to behold. Thanks for this Queen.

Queenet Ani
Queenet Ani
@ queenetwrites · 1 week ago

Thank you aso much Marie ❤️

Julyanne Mpyet

Julyanne Mpyet

@ julyanne_mpyet · 1 week ago

Super amazing 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾

Queenet Ani
Queenet Ani
@ queenetwrites · 1 week ago

Thank you July

Amorha Bright

Amorha Bright

@ amorha_bright · 1 week ago

Ink to remember, supper articulated dictions. Well done Queenet 👏 👏 👏

Queenet Ani
Queenet Ani
@ queenetwrites · 1 week ago

Thank you so much 😊🙏🏾

Silas Udochukwu Emulo

Silas Udochukwu Emulo

@ silas_udochukwu_emulo_ · 1 week ago

ODELUWA

Queenet Ani
Queenet Ani
@ queenetwrites · 1 week ago

Lol. That's the name 🤭