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CHAPTER TWO: MY FIRST DAY AS A PRISONER

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When the harmattan winds stop coming, that's when we'll know the spirits have abandoned us.

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Small Hero, Big Problem

Afripad

When the harmattan winds stop coming, that's when we'll know the spirits have abandoned us.

GabrielKWrites

GabrielKWrites

Small Hero, Big Problem

Afripad

When the harmattan winds stop coming, that's when we'll know the spirits have abandoned us.

GabrielKWrites

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Small Hero, Big Problem

Afripad

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The return to the sky and the journey was, genuinely, a relief.

KFC had loosened his grip. Not dramatically — he wasn't about to start asking how my day was going — but enough that I could breathe at a normal human rate, which I had started taking for granted before this whole adventure began. Maybe the near-death experience had given him perspective. Maybe a full stomach made him generous. Maybe choking for two minutes while a cobra tried to rearrange his insides had softened something in him.

Or maybe he just didn't want to deliver a flattened child.

Either way: breathing freely again was lovely.

As the clouds rolled past and the world shrank below us, my brain did what it always does when nothing is immediately trying to kill me — it started working the problem. Specifically: who sends invisible giant birds to kidnap children, and what do they want with them?

The candidates were not comforting. Human traffickers. Organ harvesters. Cannibals. Cannibal giants — a distinct and unfortunately real subcategory. Crazed cultists, of whom I had personally encountered eleven varieties and found every single one exhausting. Each possibility arrived in my head, took a brief tour, and left my blood running hotter than before.

Those kids. i have to get to them. Quickly. Can this bird not go any faster?

I'd tried reading KFC's mind before takeoff. Standard reconnaissance — slip past the surface, see what's living underneath. What I found instead was a wall protecting his mind. Not metaphorical. An actual psychic block, constructed with the kind of precise magical architecture that does not happen by accident. Whoever was running this operation had specifically accounted for psychic interference.

That meant they knew psychics existed. That meant they'd planned for it.

Sloppy villains I could handle in my sleep. I've dealt with masterminds so drunk on their own genius they forgot to lock the back door — literally and otherwise. Competent villains take actual work.

These people were competent.

Still nothing I can't handle, I told myself, with the full confidence of a man dangling from a bird's talons over the open ocean.

I looked ahead and saw thatwe had flown to a part of the sky devoid of clouds and slightly tinted purple.I saw the sun slowly plunging below the horizon.

Clouds thinned. The hairs on my hands stood up and a tingle went down my spine. And a smell arrived in the air — sharp, electric, unmistakable.

Ozone.

Now, most people smell ozone and think lightning. Reasonable assumption. Wrong, in this case, because there wasn't a cloud with ill intentions in sight. What ozone actually signals — for those of us who've spent enough time around magical phenomena to develop strong opinions about atmospheric smells — is spirit particles.

Let me explain, because this matters and because I enjoy explaining things even when no one has asked.

Everything in existence has atoms. Matter, energy, the tea your aunt makes that tastes like regret — all of it, atoms. Magic works differently. The basic unit of all things supernatural — the building blocks of every spell, spirit, curse, enchantment, and magical phenomenon ever recorded — is the spirit particle. They look like tiny glowing specks of purple light, they smell like ozone, and they're everywhere, saturating the world the way moisture saturates air. Spirit particles are visible to non-magical eyes.

Most of the time. However this time i couldn't see any visible spirit particles but yet i felt its presence.

I closed my eyes and pushed Minds-eye outward.

A wall appeared immediately — a vast curtain of shimmering purple light, translucent and enormous, stretching left and right as far as my psychic range could reach, hovering above the grey-green waters of the Eastern Ocean like it owned them. Completely invisible to normal eyes. Why are is there a wall of invisible spirit particles hanging here in the middle of nowhere?

KFC flew straight through the wall like it was a politely worded suggestion.

On the other side: an island that clearing wasn't there before we flew through the wall.

And it was floating.

Hundreds of feet above the ocean, with blobs of purple light clinging to its underside like bioluminescent barnacles, the entire landmass hovered in the air with the casual confidence of something that had been doing this for a very long time and had genuinely never considered stopping. Yellow beaches. Dense forest. Hills, grasslands, lustrous rivers and springs catching the last afternoon sun. Majestic mountains. An entire geography, just — up here. What i was looking at a a dazzling beauty of an island.

"Whoa," I said, because sometimes one word is exactly enough.

Here's the thing about magical levitation that the stories always get wrong: it's exhausting. Keeping something airborne for even a few minutes requires enormous sustained energy. I have met practitioners who could summon lightning from clear skies, cause firestorms and stop tsunamis from functioning. Not one of them — not the best of them — could levitate a garden shed for more than ten minutes before collapsing face-first into the dirt.

An entire island? Hundreds of feet up? For an unspecified but clearly very long period of time?

That's not human magic. That's never been human magic. The only beings who ever commanded that kind of power were spirits, and spirits, as of approximately one thousand years ago, are no longer our problem.

Here's the extremely condensed version of why, because it matters and I promise I'll be quick about it:

A millennium ago, spirits and humans shared the world. Some spirits were fine neighbors. Others decided that being worshipped as gods was a more appealing arrangement and ruled accordingly — as tyrants, as abusers of power, as beings who had confused can with should in ways that caused tremendous suffering. The humans who'd been taught magic by the kinder spirits eventually got tired of this and started a war. World War S. S for Spirit, obviously. It lasted two years, during which the current geographic features of the world were apparently reshaped by the sheer scale of the conflict, which is the kind of sentence that sounds dramatic until you're standing somewhere and wondering why this mountain range has a very suspicious circular crater at its center.

The war ended when a cosmic being of unclear identity descended from space and personally stopped it, which is exactly as dramatic as it sounds and exactly as poorly documented as you'd expect from an event that left most of the witnesses either dead or deeply shaken. The spirits were ordered to leave by this cosmic being. They left and they were forbidden from returning or interacting with humans again.

This is called the Spirit Prohibition, and every historian, storyteller, and griot in the known world has an opinion about it that takes at least forty-five minutes to fully express.

The relevant point: spirits are gone. Have been gone for a thousand years. The island floating in front of me was an old habitat of theirs — one of the places they'd built and occupied before the Prohibition sent them packing — and the magic holding it airborne was a thousand-year-old structural spell, still running, the way an old clock keeps ticking long after the person who wound it is gone.

It would appear that someone had moved in.

Which meant the wall of spirit particles I'd just flown through wasn't spirit-built. It was human-built — someone who understood spirit particles well enough to shape them into a perimeter barrier, using residual energy from the island's own ancient infrastructure.

That was not a small thing to know how to do.

Still fine, I told myself again, with slightly less conviction than before.

In the island's center, commanding the landscape the way important things do: a palace.

I've been to a lot of palaces. Occupational hazard of being the person kings call when something goes wrong. I've had audiences in the marble halls of Adenia's royal compound, the carved sandstone towers of the Southern Sultanate, the ice-and-obsidian fortress of the Northern Reach — which is exactly as cold as it sounds and whose heating situation is, frankly, a humanitarian concern. I have opinions.

This one was better than all of them.

The architecture was spirit-made, which you could tell because no human architect has ever produced anything that beautiful without making at least one structural compromise. The lines were impossible in the specific way that spirit construction always is — gentle where they should be sharp, soaring where they should be grounded — and even from the air the whole structure had the quality of something that had been built for a reason that went beyond shelter. It looked like an answer to a question. I just didn't know the question yet.

KFC banked toward a courtyard in the eastern wing.

A helipad. Concrete. Painted lines. A helipad, on a floating spirit island, bolted into architecture that had been standing for a thousand years. Of course, why not? I deal with strange things on a daily basis.

As we got closer, I couldsee several humanoid figures standing at the far-right end of the helipad. Iguess we're here now, these must be our kidnappers. Time to put those actingclasses to work I thought.

"AAAH, MOMMY! SOMEBODY HELP ME!!!"

I flailed my arms and arranged my face into what I intended to be terror. From the inside it felt more like a man losing an argument with a very stubborn jar. The important thing is commitment to the performance, so I committed.

KFC hovered above the helipad, deposited me with that same jarring gentleness — he really was an excellent carrier, the kidnapping aside — and landed beside me. I scrambled backward from him, screaming on cue, which meant I nearly walked directly into the welcoming committee I was supposed to be assessing.

There were eight of them.

The first seven were Leonares. I'd heard of them. Never encountered one in person. The reality was exactly what the name prepared you for and still somehow more: lions who had, at some point in their lineage, decided that walking upright and studying martial combat was the natural path forward. Bronze armor over muscles that existed in quantities I didn't know muscles came in. They all looked like they had hit the gym. Swords and spears carried with the relaxed ease of people who had never once in their lives needed to wonder whether they could win a fight.

They laughed with glee when I scrambled. The sound was somewhere between a roar and a bass note, and it vibrated in my chest in a way I chose not to examine too closely.

The eighth figure was a woman.

She was middle-aged and had pale skin beginning to show the first geography of age around the eyes and mouth. Her hair was in intricate cornrows. She wore what I could only describe as a black wedding gown that had given up on the occasion — the fabric was right, the structure was right, the drama was theoretically present — but the expression above it had never RSVP'd. She looked like someone who had submitted a formal request to leave three hours ago and was still awaiting approval.

She also wobbled slightly as she walked. Just slightly. The specific wobble of a person running on not quite enough of something they very much needed.

The Leonares fanned out in a perfect circle, leaving me with the womanin the center. "Please don't hurt me" I pleaded, curling on the concrete floor.

"Get up, little cub and keep quiet" roared one of the Leonares and he picked me up from the ground by my shirt collar – as easily as one would lift a plastic bottle – and made me stand upright. I got a closer look atthese majestic creatures, their muscles bulging beneath their pauldrons; theirmilitary stance, their yellow eyes staring at me intently as if contemplating toeat me.

The woman stopped in front of me and produced an orb from thin air.

One snap of the fingers. A dim flash. And then a round, featureless, silvery sphere sat in her palm with the quiet menace of a very boring object that was about to ruin my entire plan.

I remembered to pretend to be scared and shocked and so act as such and tried to run from her. The Lion men laughed and pushed me forward to the woman.

"Alright, let's make this quick. Little one, would you be so kind to place your hand on the orb" said the woman in a sweet and courteous manner that really didn't match with the expression on her face. 

My heart, which had been performing admirably under difficult circumstances, chose this moment to register a formal objection.

I knew exactly what that orb was. It was a spirit particle scanner.

Spirit particles — the ones I just explained, keep up — exist in every living thing, but in different concentrations depending on age, ability, and training. In a child, you'd find a tiny, dormant cluster of them. A spark. If a real child were to be scanned with this, the orb would glow dimly.

In a trained adult magic user with several decades of field experience? A bonfire. An absolute conflagration. The kind of reading that would make this orb light up like someone had smuggled a small sun into the palace.

I had been training for a very long time.

Build the walls. Right now. Immediately. Build them.

The Leonare who'd lifted me by my collar earlier steered me forward with the gentle irresistibility of a geological event. My hand hovered over the orb. The woman watched with the focused indifference of someone who had run this test several hundred times and expected absolutely nothing interesting to happen.

This is not something they teach. There's no textbook for it, no classroom, no patient instructor explaining technique. It's the kind of thing you work out across years of going places you shouldn't be and nearly getting caught, and the working-out process is not fun. The principle: your power is a fire. A bonfire, in my case — decades of accumulated training, battle-earned instinct, the full catastrophe. I needed them to see a candle. One tiny, sad, barely-alive candle. The magical signature of a slightly gifted nine-year-old with no idea what he was capable of.

I built walls around the bonfire. Stone by stone, in the two seconds I had.

My hand touched the orb.

Cold rushed up my arm — searching, intrusive, the magical equivalent of someone going through your belongings while maintaining direct eye contact. The orb flared white.

Then softened.

Then settled.

Pale blue. Dormant. Boring.

The woman's eyebrows moved one precise millimeter upward. She leaned closer, studying the color with the sharp focus of someone who had run this test enough times to notice when something was almost interesting. The orb sat in her palm and glowed its dull, unremarkable blue and I sat inside my stone walls and did not breathe and thought very loudly: Candle. Sad little candle. Nothing to see here. 

The orb steadied.

The woman straightened. Something flickered across her face — not suspicion, just the mild dissatisfaction of a professional who had hoped today might be different. "Grade three. Dormant. Adequate but unremarkable." She waved her hand, the orb evaporated, and she turned away. "Take him to the special section."

I crumpled my face and activated the tears. "C-can I go home? Please? I want my mum."

The Leonare's paw found my shoulder and steered me toward the palace entrance. I tripped twice for authenticity, looked back at the woman with my most devastated expression — she wasn't watching, she was already walking away, KFC launching back into the sky behind her — and let myself be marched inside.

Phase one: complete.

Do not celebrate. You nearly got caught by a magic marble. Keep moving.

The inside of the palace was the most beautiful place I had ever been, and simultaneously the most wrong.

The walls were pearly stone that generated light from within — warm gold with the quality of something that had been doing this since before anyone alive could remember and would keep doing it long after. The archways curved in geometries that shouldn't have worked, shaped like open mouths and singing birds and hands reaching for something above the frame. The ceiling of the main corridor was domed and mapped with constellations that were actually moving — slowly, barely, but moving — real stars wheeling across a preserved pocket of sky.

The floor was warm under my feet. Not like sun-heated stone. Like something with a heartbeat.

And bolted over all of it — clamped and nailed and plastered across every available surface with the enthusiasm of people who had moved into somewhere magnificent and immediately started treating it like a warehouse — were the administrative additions.

Iron torch brackets punched into carvings that had taken spirit artisans probably decades. Wooden signs in the blunt lettering of buildings that consider beauty a scheduling conflict: STORAGE. PERSONNEL ONLY. AUTHORIZED ACCESS BEYOND THIS POINT. A shift rotation notice pinned directly over a wall mural that appeared to depict a moment of enormous spiritual and historical significance.

The shift rotation notice was about lunch breaks.

Men and women in blue-and-green jumpsuits moved through the corridors with the brisk, purposeful energy of people who were at work and had been at work for a while and were fine with that. An hourglass wrapped in thorns on every back — a company logo, apparently, because nothing announces legitimate enterprise quite like uniform branding. Some pushed trolleys. One hurried past clutching a clipboard, muttering about inventory discrepancies.

Inventory discrepancies. They were talking about kids like merchandise.

The anger arrived, familiar and warm. I put it in its box. Not yet. Later. When it's useful.

We passed door after door. Some had crying behind them. Others had silence, and the silence was worse, because I knew exactly what kind of silence it was — the kind that comes after crying long enough that even crying starts to feel like too much effort. Some had symbols and numbers painted on the frames. Classifications. The specific shorthand of operations that have decided to think of people as inventory.

Stay professional. Stay detached. You're collecting data, that's all. Don't think about what those symbols mean. Don't think about the crying. Don't think— I thought to myself before the lion man stopped abruptly.

The Leonare stopped at an iron door. Heavy. Utilitarian. Three deadbolts, all of them serious. He unlocked them one by one with the practiced speed of someone who'd done it hundreds of times, and shoved the door open.

"Welcome to your new home, cub," he rumbled as he pushed me into the room behind the door. "Enjoy your stay here" he said with a wicked laugh and he closed the door behind me with a thump that echoed in the vast space beyond.

It had been a spirit hall once. You could still tell.

The ceiling showed a frozen nebula — stars captured mid-dance, an entire cosmic moment preserved in paint, like a skylight to a universe that had better things going on than whatever was happening in this room. The walls were muralled with spirit children playing among clouds, the paint a thousand years old and glowed lime green dimly, still doing its job out of what I could only describe as professional stubbornness. The floor was moss, soft and warm under my feet, the kind of surface that had been made with care for a purpose that had nothing to do with what it was being used for now.

Across it, in small clusters and pairs and alone in corners were children.

I counted quickly. Twenty,maybe twenty-one kids, ranging from about six to twelve. Thin, watchful, dressed in clothes that had been worn past the point where clothes had opinions about themselves. They looked at me the way people look at new arrivals to places nobody chooses to be: with the complicated arithmetic of pity, recognition, and the particular hollow exhaustion that accumulates when being scared has been the weather for long enough that you forget it used to be different. Some sat together on cotsand straw pallets, whispering. Others sat alone, rocking or staring at nothing.They looked at me with the kind of hollow eyes I recognized from my own past.

Something in my chest did something I did not have time for. The room. The children. The symbols on the doors outside. A memory that lived in a locked box tried its lock.

I immediately got pangs ofanguish, sorrow, and anger at the sight and the memory it triggered in my head.

I slammed it shut.

Data. You're collecting data. Stay in character. Do not feel things right now.

A girl stood up from the far wall.

Twelve, maybe. Braids coming undone at the ends, a smudge of dirt on one cheek, a faded gown the color of a sky that had given up on having opinions. She moved toward me with the specific kind of purpose that precedes the person — the other children shifted out of her path without being asked, because apparently that was simply what happened when she walked somewhere.

She walked over with the careful, deliberate steps of someone who's learned not to startle, and crouched in front of me.

"My name's Maya." Quiet. Warm. And underneath both of those, ground down to an edge by however many weeks this had been: a fierce, load-bearing protectiveness that was doing the structural work of keeping this room from collapsing into despair. "Welcome. You're safe here. What's your name?"

I let my shoulders fold. Let my eyes go as wide and frightened as they knew how.

"C-Colin." I wiped my nose on my sleeve — in character, entirely in character. "I want my mum."

Something moved across her face. Quick. Private.

She put a hand on my shoulder where the Leonare had beenrough with a gentleness that was clearly deliberate — the gentleness of someone who had observed the alternative and decided to be its opposite. "I know," she said. "We all do. But for now you're with us. We look out for each other."

She hugged me. Patted my back with the steady, patient rhythm of someone who had done this before, for other frightened arrivals, and would do it again.

"Where... where am I?" I whispered. "What are we all doing here? What's going to happen to us?" I continued, letting my eyes water. Maya wiped the tears rolling down my cheeks and said calmly with a voice with a soothing edge, "I'll explain everything later. Relax. Cry no more, you will tire yourself out" As she spoke, my mind flashed back to my mother and real tears rolled my cheek once more. I immediately suppressed the emotions and snapped my mind back to acting mode. 

Then she stood and turned to face the room.

"Hello, everyone!" The brightness in her voice was constructed — I could hear the seams, the places where it had been deliberately built and maintained — but it worked anyway, the way a candle works in a dark room regardless of what you know about why it's there. "This is Colin. Let's give him a big welcome. Say 'Hi, Colin!'"

"Hi, Colin," said the room, in the collective monotone of people who had not had a good reason for enthusiasm in some time.

Twenty pairs of eyes. A few hollow smiles. Several blank stares. Two kids who looked at me and quickly looked away, because looking at the new arrival meant being reminded that the outside world was still producing new arrivals, and that was a thought with no comfortable end.

I looked back at all of them.

Every single one of you, I thought, quietly and with absolute certainty. Every single one. You're all going home.

The anger rearranged itself into something lower and more load-bearing. Not hot. Just present. Permanent.

I had a lot of work to do.

I was, unfortunately, nine years old.

Still fine.

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